Thursday, October 11, 2007

Deadline #7 HW #5

Deadline Reflection
D#7 HW #5
Finally done this week was a lot, I don't know why I' surprise. Well I know it could have been better, but.......
Well as always the books helped out a lot. I've learned how to persuade my audience though a picture. I guess somethings you don't need to say anything at all. Whats that saying. A picture is worth a thousands of words.

Deadline #7 HW #3

Deadline #7 HW #3
Draft WP#2


Annotated Bibliography


I decide to write about execution in America. My research question is: Why Americans shouldn't question Execution. I plan to briefly give a history of executions in America. Methods of execution. Current debate concerning the death penalty. How many inmates/prisoner are on death row. How many inmates have been exonerated from death row. Type of crime, criminals committed to be sentenced to death. My personal opinion of the subject.


Scott,Langley, dir. video/film shot November 2005
http://www.langleycreations.com/photo/deathpenalty/video.html This web sites has a video narrated by: Warden Mervin Polk. Warden M.Polk gives a tour of the final day on death row. The preparation of an execution. I found this web sit very interesting. This site gives someone who has never seen what an prison looks like, or allows you to put yourself in the prisoner shoes.The thing I like the most about this web site, it not the visual look, it's what Warden Mervin Polk comment on, when ask about executing an individual. I believe he said, it's s sad thing but its something he must do. Scott, Langley has fought against execution since 1999. S. Langley works along with Amnesty International since 2004.

Richard, Dieter Executive Director since 1992. A graduate from Georgetown Law School
http://www.deathpenaltyinfo.org/article.php?did=144&scid=10 The DPIC was found in1990. It's home base is located in Washington D.C. This my #1 resource for statics of United States Execution information. When I found this web site I fell in love, not really. However I got a lot of information from this web site. this site has it all, FACTS, HISTORY, ISSUES, REPORTS, AND much more. I found stats for state by state crimes punishable by execution.

J.J, Malony up dated 06.20/07 Copyright 1998-2007. Pat O'Connor, Editor
http://crimemagazine.com/index.html This web site has all sorts of information, from current true crimes stories, to arguments about executions. There's also stories of old case, history of how people were hung for their crime. This is a picture of after being executed. which starts a controversy in Florida.

Copyright © 1995 to 2007 by Ontario Consultants on Religious Tolerance. Originally published: 1995-JUN-8. Last updated 2007-JAN-06. Author: Bruce A Robinso
http://www.religioustolerance.org/execute.htm This web site is about executions, news, facts, arguments about execution. People can post why the believe, OR not believe in executions. I like this site because you get to hear what peoples take on the whole issue. Also you get ideas as to what you can add to your paper. People questions and concerns.

Amnesty International Since 1961.Executive Committee: Lilian Gonçalves - Ho Kang You, Pietro Antonioli , Soledad García Muñoz , Levent Korkut , Peter Pack , Christine Pamp , Vanushi Rajanayagam, Deborah Smith ,David Stamps http://web.amnesty.org/pages/392-260407-feature-eng This web site is against executions, and promtes all types of Human rights. New about execution all around the world. I will use this site for the views for the other side of execution.

Apr 27th 2007,From The Economist print edition. More and more countries have doubts about the death penalty
http://www.economist.com/printedition/displayStory.cfm?story_id=9084818&fsrc=RSS This is a current issue concerning lethal injection.The passage below is a copy from the link above it states what the link is about. (In Florida last December, Angel Diaz was executed by lethal injection. The three-drug cocktail that is used by 37 American states is supposed first to induce unconsciousness, then to paralyse muscles and block breathing, and finally to stop the heart. But after the first injection, Diaz continued to move, squint and grimace as he tried to mouth words. A second dose was administered; only after 34 minutes was he declared dead. A post mortem showed the first needle had plunged through the intended vein, injecting the deadly chemicals into soft tissue instead. Two days later Governor Jeb Bush suspended executions in the state and set up a commission with a mandate to consider the humanity and constitutionality of lethal injections).

Capital punishment, Cause for a pause. Sep 27th 2007. From The Economist print edition
http://www.economist.com/research/articlesBySubject/displaystory.cfm?subjectid=348951&story_id=9867645 "The Supreme Court agrees to examine executions by lethal injection. Injections were introduced in 1978 as a supposedly more humane alternative to other forms of capital punishment—hanging, firing squad, electrocution and the gas chamber".

Capital punishment in America. Revenge begins to seem less sweet. Aug 30th 2007 BOULDER, COLORADO, AND HUNTSVILLE, TEXAS. From The Economist print edition
http://www.economist.com/world/na/displaystory.cfm?story_id=9719806 This article talks about how Texas is just about the on state that is slowing down when it comes to lethal injections.


Deadline #7 HW #2

Annotated Bibliography

Deadline #7 HW #1

Deadline #7 HW #1
Reading Reflection
Chapter 2 - Argument from the Heart-Pathos
Let me first define what Pathos is: A strategy in which a writer tries to generate specific emotions (such as fear, envy, anger or pity), in an audience to dispose it ti accept a claim. Everything an Argument pg.
So based on the definition of a Pathos I would want to either write or show my audience something that draws them in. Your trying to hit your audience soft spot "heart". All around us in life we see pathos from advertising commericals. Example: We've all seen the commerical feed the hungry kids, money for the poor sick kids in some other countries. Well in chapter 2 gives examples of how people different types of methods to play on other peoples emotions to draw them in to persuade them to be on their side of whatever issue, or cause.
Chapter 3 - Arguments based on Character-Ethos
Ethos: The self image a writer creates to define a relationship with readers in argument, most writers try to establish an ethos that suggests authority and creditability.
Everything an Argument pg.
Bottom line depending what point your trying to make, your source doesn't have to be an expert. Here a short example: If you want to put grass in your back. Would you ask your cousin who has his own business in landscaping, or a doctor. Well I would pick my cousin.
Well this also applies to your paper.Your source my have a PhD, or some other type of degree in what your topic is concerning. However some of your audience will have a hard time trusting someone who talks from book knowledge, when what really counts is hands on experience. However this goes 2 ways.